Comments on: Takleef me hu mai bahut aaj,

By: jeetu

jeetu — Sat, 01 Aug 2009 06:12:26 +0000

bahat khoob

nuts — Thu, 09 Jul 2009 11:29:04 +0000

u r 2222 good AJ…

AJ — Thu, 09 Jul 2009 07:24:07 +0000

Hi Nuts……..Another small one

aapki kashish main koshish ki mainey jeeney ki
milaa naa koi jaam bhara jub koshish kee peeney ki

tassallee ab rahin nahin par aarzoo abhee bhee sisak rahi
kaheen dil key ek koney main dhadkan ban kar tum dhadak rahi

aapki kashish main koshish ki mainey jeeney ki…

nuts — Thu, 09 Jul 2009 06:51:42 +0000

Hi AJ,

Kyaa baat hai….aapne to kamaal hi kar diyaa…waiting for more lines from you,….

Nuts

nuts — Thu, 09 Jul 2009 06:48:36 +0000

Hello Adiiji,

Ek line me hi aapne itnaa kuc keh diye…..likhte rahiye….
Nuts

AJ — Thu, 09 Jul 2009 06:24:30 +0000

Kabhi jo apney they koi, unki bevafai meraa jaam bani
Hum samajhtey hain ab unki bevafai hamara inaam sahi

Takleef main hun aaj bohot kyunki dard chhalakney laga hai
Samjhengey kya mujhey ab wo, chhalktey aansoo main dard kee pehchaan nahin

adil akhtar — Mon, 06 Jul 2009 23:36:27 +0000

arze niyaze ishk ke kabil nahin raha.jis dil pe hame

naaz tha wo dil nahih raha

adil akhtar — Mon, 06 Jul 2009 23:24:15 +0000

suna hai tuhari wafa bik rahi hai.gar ye sach hai to tum daam likhna

Ajnabi — Fri, 12 Jun 2009 22:51:00 +0000

Hain maalum mujhe ki bhura hoon main

Agar yeh main nahin tho kya hoon main

Kyu lage ethna ghira hoon main

Is zamaane se judaa hoon main

Ajnabi — Fri, 12 Jun 2009 22:50:41 +0000

Hindi..written in english…

Hain maalum mujhe ki bhura hoon main

Agar yeh main nahin tho kya hoon main

Kyu lage ethna ghira hoon main

Is zamaane se judaa hoon main