Lamha

Badi koshish ke baad maine use bhula diya..
Uski yaadon ko dil se mita diya…
Phir ek din uska paigam aaya..
Likha tha…mujhe bhool jao..
Aur mujhe bhoola hua har lamha yaad dila diya…
                                                   — Prerna Daga

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Published in: on March 12, 2008 at 4:21 pm  Comments (4)  

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  1. Kya baat hai..dard bhi hai…par chupa hua…jaise ab dard ko ek dawaa mil gayi ho…

    Aisa lagta hai ki aapko kabhi pyar hua tha…kho gaya…aur aapne bahut koshisho ke baad use phir dhudhne se khukdo roka…aur tab tak phir takdeer ne aapko pyar ke saamne khada kar diya…koi aur aa gaya jise aapse ishq ho gaya…..

    U write very well Prerna..I read the ones u have written on the comments page as well…and if I had to guess u would not be one of those who just write for the heck of writing….There’s something very elegant and mature about the way u write….

    Great going…will come back to read more…
    All the best to you…

    Nikhs

  2. I agree with Nikhil,
    really prerna has got a very stle element in her shaayaris.
    prernaa – aapki to fan following bad rahi hai.

    Likhte rahiye prerna…

    Regards,
    Nuts

  3. Prerna..u rock…ghayal kar diya!!

    Send these to get them published in some collection or book or whatever,otherwise its a case of wasted talent.
    Tell me something-do u sing as well because I think a person like u would have a melodiuos voice…

    Would like to know you better mam..of course if u want to !!!

    Will wait for a reply.

  4. hello shekhar,

    its a great idea,are prerna seriously book print karvaao tum.

    and shekharji kyaa baat hai meri shaayari’s yaa poems aapko pasand nahi aayi kyaa 😉

    just kidding..all compliments/comments welcome

    Nuts


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