Koshish chali….

Mujhe achaa banaane ki fir koshish chali…
Kinaare dariyaa milaane ki fir koshish chali…
Kabhi apnaa kabhi duniyaa ka vastaa dekar…
Mujhe mujh se chudaane ki fir koshish chali….

Published in: on October 27, 2007 at 6:58 am  Comments (14)  

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  1. On October 30, 2007 at 8:04 am jaijain said:

    khushi ki chand boondien nahi, dard ka gehra sailab hi sahi,
    muskurata hua sapna nahi to tuta hua badnasib khwab hi sahi,
    waise to marne ka samaan bhi taiyar hai aur mera janaja bhi,
    aur aye jaan, jaan jate jate tu nahi to kya teri yad hi sahi

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  2. On October 30, 2007 at 8:16 am nuts said:

    Hi Jai..

    Awesome lines yaar..
    Likhte raho…

    Nuts

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  3. On October 30, 2007 at 12:15 pm Nihar Nagar said:

    Humko bataya tha unhone ek baar
    Ki unko sirf ujaale hii bhaate hain
    Kahin vo darr na jayein andhere mein
    Is liye roshni ke liye hum dil jalaate hain

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  4. On October 30, 2007 at 12:38 pm nuts said:

    Hi Nihar,….

    u 22 write shaayari kyaa..
    hey hey!!1 i never knew…college me to kabhi shaayari nahi kari….
    very nice lines….
    keep writing,

    Smiles,
    Nuts

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  5. On October 31, 2007 at 8:11 am Nihar Nagar said:

    Thanks nuts
    bus tumhari shayari padhte padhte mujhe bhi aa gayi

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  6. On October 31, 2007 at 8:53 am Nihar Nagar said:

    Pyasi nigahon ne her pal tumhara sath manga
    jaise amawas ne her raat chand maanga
    rooth gaya woh khuda bhi hum se
    jab hum ne apni her dua main tumhara sath manga

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  7. On October 31, 2007 at 9:18 am nuts said:

    hi nihar.,..

    ab to mai hi aapki fan ho gayi hu..
    22 gud yaar..
    ye shaayari to mai website pe publish kar rahi hu (ofcorse with ur name) 🙂

    Nuts

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  8. On November 1, 2007 at 9:04 am Nihar Nagar said:

    thanks nuts

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  9. On November 1, 2007 at 9:10 am Nihar Nagar said:

    aapki ek yaad bechain bana jati hai,
    har kali mein suraat nazar aati hai
    kaisa haal kiya aapki mohabbat ne,
    neend aati hai to aakhen bura man jati hai

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  10. On November 1, 2007 at 9:12 am Nihar Nagar said:

    konsi website pe kar rahi ho

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  11. On November 1, 2007 at 11:19 am nuts said:

    Hi Nihar…

    Lo kar di aapki shaayari publish 🙂

    Nuts

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  12. On November 1, 2007 at 11:54 am Nihar Nagar said:

    thanks a lot nuts

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  13. On November 2, 2007 at 8:42 am mandeep said:

    hi

    this is realy very nice shayeri

    i am mandeep from punjab ,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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  14. On November 2, 2007 at 11:43 am nuts said:

    Hi Mandeep…

    Thanks a lot for your appreciation.
    Keep writing and keep visiting

    Smiles,
    Nuts

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